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The table illustrates the percentage of students enroll in four different kinds of schools from 2000 to 2009.

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The table illustrates the percentage of students enroll in four different kinds of schools from 2000 to 2009. Overall, it is clear that the proportion of students attending specialist schools, grammar schools and voluntary - controlled schools dicreased while this figure for community schools increased. In 2000, voluntary schools headed for the proportion of students, at 52% which is higher than the percentage of pupils enrolling in grammar schools (24%). 12% of students attending in specialist schools and community schools for each. In 2009, the percentage of pupils going to voluntary - controlled schools declined dramatically to only 20%. Grammar schools and specialist schools also saw a slight decrease, to 12% and 10% respectively. In contrast, 2009 witnessed a significant increase of the student attendance in community schools, from 12% in 2000 to 58% in 2009.
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from 2000 to 2009.

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attending specialist
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, grammar
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and voluntary
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dicreased
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increased.

In 2000, voluntary
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headed for the proportion of
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, at 52% which is higher than the percentage of pupils enrolling in grammar
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(24%). 12% of
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attending in specialist
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for each.

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controlled
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declined
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, from 12% in 2000 to 58% in 2009.
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IELTS academic The table illustrates the percentage of students enroll in four different kinds of schools from 2000 to 2009.

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