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IELTS Essay: Two Graphs (Pie and Bar Charts)

IELTS Essay: Two Graphs (Pie and Bar Charts) PVEqJ

The bar chart depicts information about how long students spent in school by gender from 2000 to 2010, while the pie illustrate where they were studying. Looking from overall perspective, it is apparent that both male and female saw a steadily rises in years spent at school, whereas male figures was higher and there was a shifted trend in the type of degree they got. In 2000, male spent around 7. 5 years in school and females were at 5. 5. The gap between two gender remained nearly identical over each 2 year period. However, the trend for males ended up over 9 years and woman narrowed the difference slightly just under 8 years. In pie chart, there were approximately equal proportions for secondary, collage, diplomas and university degree in 2000. The most of students were in secondary school which was equal to 27. 7% and it was 1. 2% higher than collage, 3. 7 more than those studying for diplomas and students who had the university degree stand at 21. 8 %. On the contrary, in 2010 the lowest ratio belongs to the secondary school (8%) and university degree surged to 44. 5%. In addition, the noticable difference was the drop in collage students which declined from 26. 5% to 16. 3% while diploma students rose to 31. 2%.

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school
 by gender from 2000 to 2010, while the pie illustrate where they were studying.

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, whereas male figures was higher and there was a shifted trend in the type of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermstrengthseverityratepointgrade
degree
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.

In 2000, male spent around 7. 5 years in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
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 and females were at 5. 5. The gap between two Possible agreement error. The noun 'gender' seems to be countable, so consider using: "genders".genders
gender
 remained nearly
 identical over each 2 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 period. However
, the trend for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboyguyfather
males
 ended up over 9 years and woman narrowed the difference slightly
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 under 8 years.

In pie chart, there were approximately equal proportions for secondary, collage, diplomas and university You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermstrengthseverityratepointgrade
degree
 in 2000. The most of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 were in secondary You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
 which was equal to 27. 7% and it was 1. 2% higher than collage, 3. 7 more than those studying for diplomas and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 who had the university You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermstrengthseverityratepointgrade
degree
 stand at 21. 8 %. On the contrary
, in 2010 the lowest ratio belongs to the secondary You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
 (8%) and university You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermstrengthseverityratepointgrade
degree
 surged to 44. 5%. In addition
, the Possible spelling mistake found.noticeable
noticable
 difference was the drop in collage You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 which declined from 26. 5% to 16. 3% while diploma You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 rose to 31. 2%. 