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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. kYgQ2
The line graph illustrates the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train over 60 years from 1970 and 2030. And number of commuters are given in millions. Overall, number of commuters used car and train increased over the period given while the bus usage, it decreased. For the whole period given cars were the most popular used transport and following buses were second popular used transport until 2010, but after that usage of train rose and bus became least used transport. With regards to the number of people used, it began around 5 million commuters for car transport in the first year after which the figure flucutated and reaches to maximum number of commuters which is 9 million. And for bus transport it began around 4 million people and dropped slowly to 3 milllion over the 60 years. And for train transport it began around 2. 5 million and rose to 5 million with small fluctuations in between the given period and number of commuters used bus and train transport are same in one year between 2010 and 2020.
The line graph illustrates the average
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, bus or
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over 60 years
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from 1970 and 2030
. And
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in millions.

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commuters
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used
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car
and
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increased over the period
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while the bus usage, it decreased. For the whole period
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given
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cars
were the most popular
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used
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and following buses were second popular
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used
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until 2010,
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after that usage of
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rose and bus became
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least
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used
transport.

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people
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, it began around 5
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million
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commuters
for
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in the
first
year after which the figure
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flucutated
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of
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commuters
which is 9 million.

And for bus
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it began around 4
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million
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people
and dropped
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milllion
over the 60 years.

And for
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train
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it began around 2. 5
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and rose to 5
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million
with
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small
fluctuations in between the
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given
period and
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number
of
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commuters
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used
bus and
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train
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are same in one year between 2010 and 2020.

IELTS academic The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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185 words
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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