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The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. NryQb
The two-column graphs illustrate data related to what did the UK graduate and postgraduate students after leaving their college in the year 2008. Overall, it is interesting that the maximum number of students from both graduate and postgraduate chose further study whereas voluntary work was done by the minimum number of graduates and postgraduates. The first chart shows in 2008, the part-time job was done by 17735 UK graduates while only 3500 students went for voluntary work. Moreover, the highest number of students chose further study which was 29665 students and 16235 students unemployed in 2008. In the second chart, 2535 postgraduate students sought part-time work. Next, the lowest number of undergraduate students, only 345 students, did voluntary work. Lastly, further study was chosen by 2725 postgraduate students whilst 1625 postgraduate students did not work in 2008.
The two-column graphs illustrate data related to what did the UK
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after leaving their college in the year 2008.

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from both
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and
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postgraduate
chose
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study whereas voluntary
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work
was done
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graduates
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3500
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students
went for voluntary
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work
.
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number
of
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students
chose
further
study which was 29665
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students
and 16235
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unemployed in 2008.

In the second chart, 2535
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postgraduate
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sought part-time
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work
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of undergraduate
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345
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, did voluntary
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work
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by 2725
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postgraduate
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students
whilst 1625
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postgraduate
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did not
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work
in 2008.
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IELTS academic The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

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