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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. 56L7B

The two pictorial of an island demonstrates some tourist amenities prior and after the it is build. Overall, the crucial factor of construction is to introduce some facilities for living on this island for travelers. Before the construction, it was just 100 metres island with some trees and beach. However, After construction of plethora of amenities, now visitors can also live on the island. There are ample amount of huts are constructed for travelers to live inside, In addition, restaurant facility is also build where everyone can eat their cuisine. Furthermore, Reception area was constructed near to restaurant and the vehicle track also constructed from restaurant to reception and to Pier, where tourists can park their boats. Footpath was introduced to beach and every huts, so that tourist can easily reach there accommodation easily. Beach is also introduced for swimming only.

The two pictorial of an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 demonstrates This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 tourist amenities prior and after Possible typo. Did you mean "the" or "it"?theit
the it
 is build. Overall
, the crucial factor of construction is to introduce This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 facilities for living on this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 for travelers.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
 the construction, it was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 100 Possible spelling mistake. 'metres' is British English.meters
metres
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 trees and beach. However
, After construction of plethora of amenities, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 visitors can also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
. There are ample Possible agreement error. Did you mean "amounts"?amounts
amount
 of huts are constructed
 for travelers to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 inside, In addition
, restaurant facility is also
Consider using a past participle here: "built".built
build
 where everyone can eat their cuisine. Furthermore
, Reception area was constructed
 near to restaurant and the vehicle This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
track
also
 constructed from restaurant to reception and to Pier, where tourists can park their boats.

Footpath was introduced
 to beach and every The noun should be probably in the singular form: "hut"?hut
huts
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that tourist can easily
 reach there accommodation easily
. Beach is also
 introduced for swimming This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
. 