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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. 56L7B
The two pictorial of an island demonstrates some tourist amenities prior and after the it is build. Overall, the crucial factor of construction is to introduce some facilities for living on this island for travelers. Before the construction, it was just 100 metres island with some trees and beach. However, After construction of plethora of amenities, now visitors can also live on the island. There are ample amount of huts are constructed for travelers to live inside, In addition, restaurant facility is also build where everyone can eat their cuisine. Furthermore, Reception area was constructed near to restaurant and the vehicle track also constructed from restaurant to reception and to Pier, where tourists can park their boats. Footpath was introduced to beach and every huts, so that tourist can easily reach there accommodation easily. Beach is also introduced for swimming only.
The two pictorial of an
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island
demonstrates
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some
tourist amenities prior and after
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the it
is build.
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, the crucial factor of construction is to introduce
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some
facilities for living on this
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island
for travelers.

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Before
the construction, it was
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just
100
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metres
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island
with
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some
trees and beach.
However
, After construction of plethora of amenities,
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now
visitors can
also
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live
on the
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island
. There are ample
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amount
of huts
are constructed
for travelers to
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live
inside,
In addition
, restaurant facility is
also
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build
where everyone can eat their cuisine.
Furthermore
, Reception area
was constructed
near to restaurant and the vehicle
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track
also
constructed from restaurant to reception and to Pier, where tourists can park their boats.

Footpath
was introduced
to beach and every
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huts
,
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so
that tourist can
easily
reach there accommodation
easily
. Beach is
also
introduced for swimming
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only
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IELTS academic The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
141 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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