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The table illustrates the percentage of Great Brain’s smokers categorized in age, gender and level.

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The table illustrates the percentage of Great Brain’s smokers categorized in age, gender and level. Overall, It is clear that people aged 20-24 tend to smoke the most in both genders. The figure for smokers in 16-19 is over a quarter of the population, 23% for men and 25% for women. At 20-24-year-olds, 32% of men smoke lightly, compared to 29% of women. By contrast, the middle-aged has the greatest number of heavy smokers, at 12% for men and 9% for women respectively. The figures also show that when age increases, fewer residents smoke. This trend is true for both men and women. The elder from 60
The table illustrates the percentage of Great Brain’s smokers categorized in age, gender and level.

Overall
, It is
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people
aged 20-24 tend to smoke the most in both genders.

The figure for smokers in 16-19 is over a quarter of the population, 23% for
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men
and 25% for
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women
. At 20-24-year-olds, 32% of
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men
smoke
lightly
, compared to 29% of
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women
. By contrast, the middle-aged has the greatest number of heavy smokers, at 12% for
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men
and 9% for
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women
respectively
.

The figures
also
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show
that when age increases, fewer residents smoke. This trend is true for both
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men
and
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women
. The elder from 60

IELTS academic The table illustrates the percentage of Great Brain’s smokers categorized in age, gender and level.

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