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the number of people visiting a particular Caribbean Island from 2017 to 2010

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The graph illustrates the number of people visiting a particular Caribbean Island from 2017 to 2010. It shows that 6. 75 million visitors were staying on a cruise, while another 10 million visitors were staying on Island throughout their trip. In the year 2010, only 250 thousand visitors were staying on the ship. There was a gradual increase in 2011, that is when they had 500 thousand visitors staying on the cruise ship. However, the following year (2013) increased back to half a million visitors. Ever since 2013, the number of visitors that were staying on cruise ships has been dramatically growing throughout the end of 2017. Meanwhile, in the year 2010, 750 thousand visitors were staying on the island. The following year (2011) had the same amount of visitors as the previous year. The number of visitors staying on the island increased sharply in 2012 to 125 million visitors and 1. 5 million visitors respectively in 2013, 2014, and 2015. Sadly, there was a slight decrease in 2016. Fortunately, the following year (2017), the number of visitors staying on the island went back again to a total of 1. 5 million visitors. Overall, the presence of visitors kept increasing throughout the period from 2010 to 2015. There was only one consistent year (2016), while a slight increase happened in 2017. A total of 25. 5 million people have visited the Caribbean Island.
The graph illustrates the
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people
visiting a particular Caribbean
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Island
from 2017 to 2010. It
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shows
that 6. 75
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million
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visitors
were
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staying
on a cruise, while another 10
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million
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visitors
were
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staying
on
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Island
throughout their trip.

In the
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2010,
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only
250 thousand
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visitors
were
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staying
on the ship. There was a gradual increase in 2011,
that is
when they had 500 thousand
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visitors
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staying
on the cruise ship.
However
, the following
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year
(2013) increased back to half a
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million
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visitors
. Ever since 2013, the
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of
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visitors
that were
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staying
on cruise ships has been
dramatically
growing throughout the
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end
of 2017.

Meanwhile, in the
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2010, 750 thousand
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were
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on the
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island
. The following
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year
(2011) had the same amount of
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visitors
as the previous
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year
. The
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number
of
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visitors
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staying
on the
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increased
sharply
in 2012 to 125
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million
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visitors
and 1. 5
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visitors
respectively
in 2013, 2014, and 2015.
Sadly
, there was a slight decrease in 2016.
Fortunately
, the following
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year
(2017), the
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number
of
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visitors
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staying
on the
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island
went back again to a total of 1. 5
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million
visitors.

Overall
, the presence of
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visitors
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kept
increasing throughout the period from 2010 to 2015. There was
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only
one consistent
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year
(2016), while a slight increase happened in 2017. A total of 25. 5
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million
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people
have visited the Caribbean
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Island
.
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IELTS academic the number of people visiting a particular Caribbean Island from 2017 to 2010

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