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the chart showsthe average speed of city traffic in 9 countries over the thirty year period

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The table compares how the average speed of vehicles in city changed in 9 different countries in the examed time from 1990-2020. Overall. There was an increase in Italy, Brazil and Spain, while France, USA, UK, Canada saw the opposite trends. In addition, Russia was the country which witnessed the flutuation The number of France started at 54 after which it experienced a decline to 42 in 2010, before ending the period at 32 in 2020. About 36 (1990) with an decrease in USA and a final with 27. The similar changes also saw in the figure of UK and Canada. The number of UK was at 34, followed by an slight decline to 33, and a final drop to 29. The average speed of Canada was higher than that of UK, which was 50 in 1990 and a final period at 40. Besides, approximately 27, with a fluctuation and a final at 37 can be seen in the figure of Russia. The opposite changes can be seen in the figure for Italy, Brazil and Spain. In 2020, the figures for Italy and Brazil increased by 2, compared to 2010 figures. Also, that number of Spain increased to 33, reaching at 38. Moreover, figures for Chile remained stable at 32 after slightly increasing by 2
The table compares how the average speed of vehicles in city
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time from 1990-2020.

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the opposite trends.
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at 54 after which it experienced a decline to 42 in 2010,
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ending the period at 32 in 2020. About 36 (1990) with
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decrease
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with 27. The similar
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of UK and Canada. The number of UK was at 34, followed by
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slight decline to 33, and a
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average speed of Canada was higher than that of UK, which was 50 in 1990 and a
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period at 40.
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at 37 can be
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of Russia.

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for Italy, Brazil and Spain. In 2020, the
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for Italy and Brazil increased by 2, compared to 2010
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, that number of Spain increased to 33, reaching at 38.
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for Chile remained stable at 32 after
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