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Given is the bar chart providing us with information regarding the consumption and the purchasing of coffee plus tea by individuals in five selected towns in Australia. These data are collected based on the questionnaire. Overall, it is starkly apparent that with exception of one city, the other four towns’ residents have gone to café mostly rather than buying fresh or instant coffee in the late month. When scrutinizing more rigorously, it can be inferred that more than half of the dwellers in four cities including Sydney, Melbourne, Bris, and Hobart have stepped out to café in a bid to drink tea or coffee. The highest rate has belonged to Melbourne with approximately 64%. Meanwhile, Adelaide has the lowest level of visiting café in the last 4 weeks by only 49%, which is 15% less than Melbourne. Turning to instant coffee purchasing, the threshold spanned from about 46% in Sydney up to 54% in Hobart. On the other hand, buying fresh coffee was less common in the last month and Brisbane, for example, has brought almost 34% which is 20 percent below that going to a café. Sydney's fellow citizens have purchased fresh coffee near 44% which made this city a huge consumer of it.
Given
is the bar chart providing us with information regarding the consumption and the purchasing of
coffee
plus tea by individuals in five selected towns in Australia. These data
are collected
based on the questionnaire.

Overall
, it is
starkly
apparent that with
exception of
one city, the other four towns’ residents have gone to café
mostly
rather
than buying fresh or instant
coffee
in the late month.

When scrutinizing more
rigorously
, it can
be inferred
that more than half of the dwellers in four cities including Sydney, Melbourne,
Bris
, and Hobart have stepped out to café in a bid to drink tea or
coffee
. The highest rate has belonged to Melbourne with approximately 64%. Meanwhile, Adelaide has the lowest level of visiting café in the last 4 weeks by
only
49%, which is 15% less than Melbourne.

Turning to instant
coffee
purchasing, the threshold spanned from about 46% in Sydney up to 54% in Hobart.
On the other hand
, buying fresh
coffee
was less common in the last month and Brisbane,
for example
, has brought almost 34% which is 20 percent below that going to a café. Sydney's fellow citizens have
purchased
fresh
coffee
near 44% which made this city a huge consumer of it.
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IELTS academic describing bar chart about coffee and tea

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205 words
6.5
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