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The table illustrates the cost of water usage in five different Australian cities.

The table illustrates the cost of water usage in five different Australian cities. gbOK1

The table illustrates the cost of water usage in five different Australian cities. Overall, it can be seen that residents in Perth spent the largest amount of money on water while those in Melbourne have the lowest average bill. Additionally, while Melbourne and Sydney were two cities which have no difference in the cost of water when exceeding 125 kiloliters, Adelaide and Perth residents have to pay twice and thrice as much as the price if the water usage over this limit. People living in Adelaide and Perth pay 0. 42 per kiloliters for use under 125KL. However, these number increase up to 1. 00 and 1. 5 respectively when the use over 125KL. In contrast, Melbourne and Sydney household pay the same price for every regardless it is over 123KL or not. The avarage water bill in Melbourne is far lower than those in remaining four cities, at 253$. People in other cities pay between 310$ and 332$, with the largest cost belonging to in Perth.

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