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value of country's export and percentage changes in the table

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The given charts illustrate value of five export categories ( petroleum, engineering, gems and jewellery, agriculture and textiles) and its percentage changes in 2015 and 2016 in the particular country. Overall, petroleum was the highest export category, while textile is the least export category in both years. Only gems and jewelry decreased the percentage value, whereas other categories increased their percentage value. Both years petroleum exported more than $60 billion, which was the highest earning for the country. Textile industry exported below $30 billion in 2015, while it increased in 2016(more than $30 billion export). But textile increased export by 15. 24% in 2016, which is the highest increment of percentage in that year. In 2015 gems and jewellery exported more than $40 billion, however it is approximately $40 billion in 2016. This marked as 5. 18% decrement of export in 2016, which is the only category showed decrement in percentage. In conclusion, cumulatively, country has good earnings through export.
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petroleum, engineering, gems and
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, agriculture and
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textiles)
and its
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in 2015 and 2016 in the particular country.

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, petroleum was the highest
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, while
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is the least
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in both years.
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Only
gems and jewelry decreased the
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value, whereas other
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increased their
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value.

Both
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petroleum exported more than $60
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, which was the highest earning for the country.
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Textile
industry exported below $30
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in 2015, while it increased in 2016(more than $30
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.
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increased
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by 15. 24% in 2016, which is the highest increment of
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in that year.

In 2015 gems and
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jewellery
exported more than $40
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it is approximately $40
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in 2016. This marked as 5. 18% decrement of
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in 2016, which is the
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decrement in percentage.

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earnings through
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