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The pie chart gives information on the main causes of declining agricultural land productivity.The table provides information how these causes have affected three regions of the world over the 1990s.

The pie chart gives information on the main causes of declining agricultural land productivity. The table provides information how these causes have affected three regions of the world over the 1990s. jbXNw
Overall, over-feeding and deforestation are the main causes of declining agricultural productivity. Deforestation, over-grazing, over-cultivation affected the European region the most. To begin with, over-feeding of animals accounted for 35% worldwide. Deforestation formed 30% and over-cultivation for 28%. Other causes comprised 7%. North America did not show a high percentage of any degredation. Over-cultivation formed 3, 3% but this percentage was lower than in other regions. Total land degraded accounted 5% in North America. Regarding to Europe, it should a high percentage of all degradation. For example, deforestation was 9, 8%, iver-cultivation was 7, 7%, over-grazing was 5, 5% in 1990s. Total land degraded was 23%. Ocenia showed a high oercentage for only one reason. Over-grazing accounted 11, 3%. Total land degraded 13% in 1990s
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, over-grazing, over-cultivation
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with, over-feeding of animals accounted for 35% worldwide.
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formed 30% and over-cultivation for 28%. Other causes comprised 7%. North America did not
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Europe, it should a high percentage of all degradation.
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was 9, 8%,
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IELTS academic The pie chart gives information on the main causes of declining agricultural land productivity. The table provides information how these causes have affected three regions of the world over the 1990s.

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