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“We must come to realize that mankind is, in fact, a contagious virus seeking to infect and wipe away all other forms of life on Earth, and it is viruses that are protecting the welfare of Mother Nature by eliminating human existence.”

“We must come to realize that mankind is, in fact, a contagious virus seeking to infect and wipe away all other forms of life on Earth, and it is viruses that are protecting the welfare of Mother Nature by eliminating human existence. ” ebylJ
Humanity is a great human being, a kind of person who knows all about how to create and make the best use of the resources on the earth. However, the virus itself is playing the role of leading the human dead and protecting the natural environment during the pandemic. Why should we consider ourselves a virus? because it is a peaceful way of human greed and danger. Virus is considered as a kind of strain that is devastating and affecting human life. That virus is trying to save other lives, like they burn forests for profit, forgetting that living plants will die gradually over time and lose their shade and healthy breath. People. Those cruel people also directly killed and hunted rare animals. Valuable species that we should preserve, they breed hunting just for the sake of satisfying human needs. Or how many projects and factories have discharged chemical waste from factory and brought contamination to the environment and atmosphere. This is a virus with many functions; emotional, perceptive, has a heart but it still endangers this abundant and beautiful nature. They find ways to satisfy their personal needs without thinking about a healthy and developing future. Moreover, their own work has also led to an epidemic situation that haunts every person in the country when thinking about it. This virus was born from uncivilized and unhygienic actions, so it was born. The real virus seems to be returning to warn behavior and force us humans to pay a heavy price. The virus is mercilessly killing a lot of people, causing the economies of countries to decline, people lack of jobs, students cannot concentrate on studying due to the impact of the epidemic. And it is doing what people have mindlessly done before, like killing animals for profit, and now the worms from that animal have returned to take people's lives and money. It also helps nature to be somewhat revived, which is the separation between man and nature. Humans are no longer free to go around on their own, but only stay indoors with four secret walls. The elimination of human existence will help nature as if it is energized because it is set free.
Humanity is a great
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human
being, a kind of person who knows all about how to create and
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make
the best
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use
of the resources on the earth.
However
, the
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virus
itself is playing the role of leading the
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human
dead and protecting the natural environment during the pandemic.

Why should we consider ourselves a
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virus
?
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because
it is a peaceful way of
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human
greed and
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danger
.
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Virus
is considered
as a kind of strain
that is
devastating and affecting
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human
life. That
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virus
is trying to save other
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lives
, like they burn forests for profit, forgetting that living plants will
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die
gradually
over time and lose their shade and healthy breath.
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People
. Those cruel
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people
also
directly
killed and hunted rare animals. Valuable species that we should preserve, they breed hunting
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just
for the sake of satisfying
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human
needs. Or how
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many
projects and factories have discharged chemical waste from factory and brought contamination to the environment and atmosphere. This is a
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virus
with
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many
functions; emotional, perceptive, has a heart
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but
it
still
endangers this abundant and
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beautiful
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nature
. They find ways to satisfy their personal needs without thinking about a healthy and developing future.

Moreover
, their
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own
work has
also
led to an epidemic situation that haunts every person in the country when thinking about it. This
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virus
was born
from uncivilized and unhygienic actions,
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so
it
was born
. The real
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virus
seems to be returning to warn behavior and force us
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humans
to pay a heavy price. The
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virus
is
mercilessly
killing
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a lot of
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people
, causing the economies of countries to decline,
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people
lack of jobs, students cannot concentrate on studying due to the impact of the epidemic. And it is doing what
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people
have
mindlessly
done
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before
, like killing animals for profit, and
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now
the worms from that animal have returned to take
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people
's
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lives
and money. It
also
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helps
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nature
to be somewhat revived, which is the separation between
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man
and
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nature
.
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Humans
are no longer free to go around on their
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own
,
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but
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only
stay indoors with four secret walls. The elimination of
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human
existence will
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help
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nature
as if it
is energized
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because
it
is set
free.
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IELTS academic “We must come to realize that mankind is, in fact, a contagious virus seeking to infect and wipe away all other forms of life on Earth, and it is viruses that are protecting the welfare of Mother Nature by eliminating human existence. ”

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