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The bar chart illustrates the estimated amount of oil produced in 6 countries between 1990 and 2010, measured in millions of barrels per day.

The bar chart illustrates the estimated amount of oil produced in 6 countries between 1990 and 2010, measured in millions of barrels per day. gbOj3
The bar chart illustrates the estimated amount of oil produced in 6 countries between 1990 and 2010, measured in millions of barrels per day. Overall, oil production capacity tended to increase during this 20-year period. The figures for Saudi Arabia were significantly higher than in the other countries, while production was lowest in Qatar. Throughout the whole period, there was a significant increase in oil production in Saudi Arabia. In 1990, just over 8 million barrels per day were produced and this rose steadily, reaching a peak of over 14 million barrels per day in 2010. In contrast, the smallest producer was Qatar. Despite a slight increase in 2000, production in Qatar remained relatively stable at less than 1 million barrels per day. The other countries saw a slight rise in oil production over the period where Iran possessed the leading position at the beginning of the period with figures of over 3 million barrels per day compared with around 2 million in Iraq, Kuwait and UAE. Although production did not increase in 2000 in UAE, it comprised approximately 4 million barrels per day in 2010 as well as other three countries.
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between 1990 and 2010,

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capacity tended to
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. The figures for Saudi Arabia

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was lowest in Qatar.

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in Saudi Arabia. In 1990,

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barrels per day in 2010.
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the estimated amount of oil produced in 6 countries between 1990 and 2010, measured in millions of barrels per day.

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