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The table illustrates the amount of money which is exported from different products in the 13-year-period from 1997 to 2010.

The table illustrates the amount of money which is exported from different products in the 13-year-period from 1997 to 2010. Wd8q
The table illustrates the amount of money which is exported from different products in the 13-year-period from 1997 to 2010. Overall, metals is the highest level of profit in data shown, which increased more than 100% over the questioned period. As can be seen clearly in the table, the amount of money manufacturing exported plummeted to a minuscule 4HK billion in 2010, followed by the earnings of clothing with the number being around 5HK billion. Regarding the table, the most significant change was the earnings of metals. Those had dramatically climbed to a staggering 5. 1HK billion, overshadowing itself with the number of only 2. 3 HK billion in 1997. The amount of money that elecommunity had was also a redoubtable opponent which increased 61% in 13 years. It is also interesting to note that in 1997 the profit of equipment was at the first rank among other counterparts, over the questioned period this number had just slightly gone up, which was 13% in 2010.
The table illustrates the amount of money which
is exported
from
different
products in the 13-year-period from 1997 to 2010.

Overall
, metals is the highest level of profit in data shown, which increased more than 100% over the questioned period.

As can be
seen
clearly
in the table, the amount of money manufacturing exported plummeted to a minuscule 4HK
billion
in 2010, followed by the earnings of clothing with the number being around 5HK
billion
. Regarding the table, the most significant
change
was the earnings of metals. Those had
dramatically
climbed to a staggering 5. 1HK
billion
, overshadowing itself with the number of
only
2. 3 HK
billion
in 1997. The amount of money that
elecommunity
had
was
also
a redoubtable opponent which increased 61% in 13 years. It is
also
interesting to note that in 1997 the profit of equipment was at the
first
rank among other counterparts, over the questioned period this number had
just
slightly
gone up, which was 13% in 2010.
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IELTS academic The table illustrates the amount of money which is exported from different products in the 13-year-period from 1997 to 2010.

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