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The table illustrates the amount of cinema viewing for films in various nations.

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The table illustrates the amount of cinema viewing for films in various nations. Overall, it is evident that most people pay much attention to action films, while horror is the least preferred. It is noticeable that cinemas welcome most of the crowded movie goers coming from India. In terms of Action movies, Indians are a big fan of this type with 8 million views, while the figure for other countries ranges from 7. 1 to 7. 6 million. With regard to the second popular film - Romance, it is also mostly chosen by Indian movie goers, at 7. 5 million, which was approximately 4 millions higher than that of Ireland. Surprisingly, the others share a similar pattern with 4. 5 million views. With respect to Comedy movies, India tops the list with 6. 5 million views, followed by Ireland, New Zealand and Japan with 5. 5, 3. 9 and 4 million views respectively. Regarding Horror films, the bottom position belongs to Japan with 2. 2 million views, which was 0. 3 million less than that of India. While most Irish people opt for horror films to watch in the big screen, with 6. 4 millions views, the New Zealand’s figure is also 4. 7 million.
The table illustrates the amount of cinema viewing for films in various nations.

Overall
, it is evident that most
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people
pay much attention to action films, while horror is the least preferred. It is noticeable that cinemas welcome most of the crowded
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goers coming from India.

In terms of Action
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movies
, Indians are a
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big
fan of this type with 8
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million
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views
, while the figure for other countries ranges from 7. 1 to 7. 6
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million
. With regard to the second popular film
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Romance, it is
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chosen by Indian
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goers, at 7. 5
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million
, which was approximately 4
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higher than that of Ireland.
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, the others share a similar pattern with 4. 5
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million
views.

With respect to Comedy
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, India tops the list with 6. 5
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million
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views
, followed by Ireland, New Zealand and Japan with 5. 5, 3. 9 and 4
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million
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views
respectively
. Regarding Horror films, the bottom position belongs to Japan with 2. 2
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views
, which was 0. 3
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less than that of India. While most Irish
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opt for horror films to
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in the
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screen, with 6. 4
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, the New Zealand’s figure is
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