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Some people feel it is best to decide on your field of work while you are still in high school. Others feel it is better to wait until later in adulthood to choose a career. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.

Some people feel it is best to decide on your field of work while you are still in high school. Others feel it is better to wait until later in adulthood to choose a career. L31kp
While some think that the best way for determination of your working career is to decide before studing at a university, others disagree and say that waiting for forthcoming years of adulthood to opt to a field is better. İ Will shed some light on both Side of view point and I subscribe to the believe that decision pertaining to career for working must be decided before attending a university. On the one hand, I believe that University education is only not long enough for people to decide on their careers but also it includes a fatiguing and intensive education. additionally, Having a good career requires a long endeavor. When you decide what you want to do in the future while you are in high school, you struggle to gain the skills which are necessary for your own career earlier. Thus, we don't waste time in a really tiring schedule while studying at university to gain the necessary qualifications for our future career. to illustrate, I read that when I was a kid, many successful scholars determined what they wanted to do in the future before participating to college. On the other hand, there is an opponent point of view which must be taken into consideration and it is that waiting for opting to a career until later period of adulthood is better. As years elapses, people become more experienced pertaning to what is better for their careers. For this reason, University students don’t have to follow a single path about their careers. And university education does not mean having a career related to the department you are studying. While studying at university, many different career opportunities can be encountered. If we decide that these opportunities are better for our careers, our lives can be directed towards opportunities that we stumple upon. To examplify, a friend of mine studying computer engineering is working as an English teacher in China after decideding to leave his current department and study English language literature. To recapitulate, while some think that it is the best to determine the career during High school, some say that deciding career in the forthcoming period of adulthood is better. İ reckon that career must be determined while studing in High school.
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.
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IELTS academic Some people feel it is best to decide on your field of work while you are still in high school. Others feel it is better to wait until later in adulthood to choose a career.

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