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As a result of industrialization, traffic congestion and housing problems are becoming the pressing issues. So some businesses are being encouraged to relocate their places to the countryside. While it is true that such progress is not advantages, the drawbacks of moving commercial ventures far outweigh these advantages. To start with the positive sides, there are numerous advantages of recolating businesses to the rural areas. This can provide with the changes of improving other facilities, such as wider roads, more facilities, and bettered living standards for locals. Moreover, there is a huge difference in the cost of housing between these two areas. For instance, a small apartment in Tashkent is three times costlier than a house in other regions. On the other hand, there are several problems which should be addressing after taking this step. First and foremost, industrialization has a precise impacts on environment, including air, water, noise pollutions, due to continuous constructions and increased the population. In today's world we can name many countries which are struggling with drinking water on a daily basis as the major part of water is used buе factories. Also these mentioned factors also ruin the scenic beauty of small towns. To conclude, due to better the traffic and residential issues, the administration should persuade the companies to move to the outskirt of the city. Although it has benefits in the development of underdeveloped areas, there are disadvantages that should be weighed carefully against the advantages. It need to be deliberated in more careful way.
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, the drawbacks of moving commercial ventures far outweigh these
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sides, there are numerous
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of
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recolating
businesses to the rural areas. This can provide with the
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changes
of improving other facilities, such as wider roads, more facilities, and bettered living standards for locals.
Moreover
, there is a huge difference in the cost of housing between these two areas.
For instance
, a
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apartment in Tashkent is three times costlier than a
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house
in other regions.
On the other hand
, there are several problems which should be addressing after taking this step.
First
and foremost, industrialization has a precise
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impacts
on environment, including air, water, noise pollutions, due to continuous constructions and increased the population. In
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today
's world we can name
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many
countries which are struggling with drinking water on a daily basis as the major part of water is
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used
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factories.
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Also
these mentioned factors
also
ruin the scenic beauty of
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small
towns.
To conclude
, due to better the traffic and residential issues, the administration should persuade the
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companies
to
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move
to the outskirt of the city. Although it has benefits in the development of underdeveloped areas, there are disadvantages that should
be weighed
carefully
against the
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advantages
. It
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need
to
be deliberated
in more careful way.
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IELTS academic advantages and disadvatages

Academic
  American English
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6.0
Overall Band Score
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