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Developments on the island

Developments on the island Ow1WE

The two maps show an island before and after the construction of new facilities for tourists. In general, interior to the introduction of new facilities there was nothing except for a number of trees on the island. However, the island became more attractive after the developments. First of all, it is apparent that most of the areas of the island are occupied by accommodation, besides, a reception in the centre and a restaurant to north of it have been built. These two buildings and the pier were connected by the vehicle track while footpath is used between cottages. Meanwhile, the beach, which is located in the east is now open to visitors to swim. It is also worth mentioning that during the reconstruction no tree was chopped down.

The two maps This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 an island This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 and after the construction of new facilities for tourists.

In general
, interior to the introduction of new facilities there was nothing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :with the exception of
except for
 a number of trees on the island.

However
, the island became more attractive after the developments.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, it is apparent that most of the areas of the island are occupied
 by accommodation, besides
, a reception in the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 and a restaurant to north of it have been built
.

These two buildings and the pier were connected
 by the vehicle This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
track
 while footpath is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 between cottages. Meanwhile, the beach, which is located
 in the east is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 open to visitors to swim. It is also
 worth mentioning that during the reconstruction no tree was chopped
 down. 