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the amount of people who visited the trhree airports in the UK

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The table shows information about the amount of people who visited the trhree airports in the UK over the five years from 1998 to 2003. Overall, the number of people travelling to th UK increased consistenly over the span. It can be seen that Gatwick airport had the most high number of visitors in the beginning and in the end of period. Regarding the amount of travellers who used Gatwhick airport, it started at 36, 5 million in 1998 and then grew gradually untill 2002. In 2003 we can see a dramatic rise in the number of people, it reached 69, 3 million. Stansted airport used only 17, 3 million people, which is very low number compare to Heathrow and Gatwick. It is interesting to point that the amount of people in the airport was the same between 2001 and 2003, it was 43, 3 million. In conclusion, the most popular airport in Great Britain among travelers was Gatwick and the least popular was Stansted airport.
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who visited the
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trhree
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airports
in the UK over the five years from 1998 to 2003.
Overall
, the
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number
of
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people
travelling to
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th
UK increased
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consistenly
over the span. It can be
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seen
that Gatwick
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airport
had
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the most high
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number
of visitors in the beginning and in the
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end
of period. Regarding the amount of
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travellers
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used
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Gatwhick
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, it
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started
at 36, 5
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million
in 1998 and then grew
gradually
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untill
2002. In
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2003 we
can
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a dramatic rise in the
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of
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people
, it reached 69, 3
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million
.
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Stansted
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airport
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used
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only
17, 3
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million
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, which is
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low
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number
compare to Heathrow and Gatwick. It is interesting to point that the amount of
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people
in the
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airport
was the same between 2001 and 2003, it was 43, 3
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In conclusion
, the most popular
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in Great Britain among travelers was Gatwick and the least popular was
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Stansted
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IELTS academic the amount of people who visited the trhree airports in the UK

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