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The diagram shows how electricity is made by coal. Overall, the process is beginning with providing coal and ending by cooling water

The diagram shows how electricity is made by coal. Overall, the process is beginning with providing coal and ending by cooling water o5G23

The diagram shows how electricity is made by coal. Overall, the process is beginning with providing coal and ending by cooling water Firstly, coal from the provider is conveyed by conveyor belt into the crushing-pulverizing, a machine that pulverizes coal into ash. Then ash is collected before going to the boiler, dust is collected in the stack for emission. However, ash is burned for boiling water which is driven through the pipe from the condenser in the boiler, creating steam. After that, steam goes along with the pipe which is connected to turbines. Steam drive turbines, make the generator spin so that make electricity in the transformer. After some adjustment, it goes straight into electric power distribution and ready for using Solid wastes are collected in the boiler, and ready for disposal. Steam after drive the turbines are cooled, and it is condensed into water by the cooling system. Finally, back to the condenser, goes through the pipe, and repeats this process.

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shows
 how electricity is made
 by coal.

Overall
, the process is beginning with providing coal and ending by cooling water

Firstly
, coal from the provider is conveyed
 by conveyor belt into the crushing-pulverizing, a machine that pulverizes coal into ash. Then ash is collected
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before
 going to the boiler, dust is collected
 in the stack for emission. However
, ash is burned
 for boiling water which is driven
 through the pipe from the condenser in the boiler, creating steam. After that, steam goes along with the pipe which is connected
 to turbines. Steam drive turbines, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the generator spin This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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make
 electricity in the transformer. After This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 adjustment, it goes straight into electric power distribution and ready for Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphusing.using!using?using:using,using;
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Solid wastes are collected
 in the boiler, and ready for disposal. Steam after drive the turbines are cooled
, and it is condensed
 into water by the cooling system. Finally
, back to the condenser, goes through the pipe, and repeats this process. 