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The diagram shows how electricity is made by coal. Overall, the process is beginning with providing coal and ending by cooling water

The diagram shows how electricity is made by coal. Overall, the process is beginning with providing coal and ending by cooling water o5G23
The diagram shows how electricity is made by coal. Overall, the process is beginning with providing coal and ending by cooling water Firstly, coal from the provider is conveyed by conveyor belt into the crushing-pulverizing, a machine that pulverizes coal into ash. Then ash is collected before going to the boiler, dust is collected in the stack for emission. However, ash is burned for boiling water which is driven through the pipe from the condenser in the boiler, creating steam. After that, steam goes along with the pipe which is connected to turbines. Steam drive turbines, make the generator spin so that make electricity in the transformer. After some adjustment, it goes straight into electric power distribution and ready for using Solid wastes are collected in the boiler, and ready for disposal. Steam after drive the turbines are cooled, and it is condensed into water by the cooling system. Finally, back to the condenser, goes through the pipe, and repeats this process.
The diagram
shows
how electricity
is made
by coal.

Overall
, the process is beginning with providing coal and ending by cooling water

Firstly
, coal from the provider
is conveyed
by conveyor belt into the crushing-pulverizing, a machine that pulverizes coal into ash. Then ash
is collected
before
going to the boiler, dust
is collected
in the stack for emission.
However
, ash
is burned
for boiling water which
is driven
through the pipe from the condenser in the boiler, creating steam. After that, steam goes along with the pipe which
is connected
to turbines. Steam drive turbines,
make
the generator spin
so
that
make
electricity in the transformer. After
some
adjustment, it goes straight into electric power distribution and ready for
using


Solid wastes
are collected
in the boiler, and ready for disposal. Steam after drive the turbines
are cooled
, and it
is condensed
into water by the cooling system.
Finally
, back to the condenser, goes through the pipe, and repeats this process.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows how electricity is made by coal. Overall, the process is beginning with providing coal and ending by cooling water

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162 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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