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The table illustrates the 6 languages which are the most popular in the world with the number of people use it.

The table illustrates the 6 languages which are the most popular in the world with the number of people use it. MM3KL
overall, mandarin chinese is the biggest language in total users in the world. Meanwhile, immediately after it, english is 2nd most popular with great contribute from number of speakers as an additional language. Hindi, Spanish, Arabic and Portuguese fall behind them. According to the table, 900 million in the number of native speakers plus 190 million speakers of an additional language lead mandarin chinese to the 1st rank in total number of speakers with 1090 million. while the figure of first language in english is 339 million, however, only english has the number of speakers as an additional language bigger than native speakers with almost double in the quantity with 603 million. the figure of speakers in both first and additional language in portuguese is the lowest with 203 million and 10 million, respectively.
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in the
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of native speakers plus 190
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to the 1st rank in total
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is 339
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bigger than native speakers with almost double in the quantity with 603
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