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these are three different crimes in England and Wales in 1970-2005. do you agree with this statement?

these are three different crimes in England and Wales in 1970-2005. Nr3Ed

The line graph compares three different crimes in England and Wales for the 35 years period of 1970-2005. Overall, the crime which is related to car theft was higher than the house burgling and the street throughout the entire was given. It can be seen that the number of the car theft and the house burgling had the same increase from 1970 to 1980. Whereas, the figure of the street robbery remain the same point.

The line graph compares three This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 crimes in England and Wales for the 35 years period of 1970-2005.

Overall
, the crime which is related
 to car theft was higher than the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 burgling and the street throughout the entire was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
.

It can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that the number of the car theft and the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 burgling had the same increase from 1970 to 1980. “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whereas
, the figure of the street robbery remain the same point. 