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The charts below show the most popular courses by admissions at UK universities in 2007 and 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The charts below show the most popular courses by admissions at UK universities in 2007 and 2014. YLkO5
The most famous subjects by admission at British universities are illustrated in the bar graphs in 2007 and 2014. The year 2014 showed a great increase in most of the courses in admission count compared to the year 2007. Most students were enrolled in the law (90, 000 students) in the former year whereas, a high number of nursing students admitted into Nursing (around 245000 students). The least students were enrolled in computer science in both years. Subjects like law (around 90000), design (around 70000), and computer science (around 55000) in 2007 had a linear increment in the following year 2014 compared to exponential growth for nursing ranging from around 58000 (during 2007) to around 245000 (during 2014). Psychology admission count had no increment nor decrement and remained stable during both the years at around 80000 admits. Pre-clinic medicine's initial figure was around 70000 (in 2007) and had a slighter positive surge to around 80000 (in 2014).
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a great increase in most of the courses in admission count compared to the
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2007. Most
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students
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in the former
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whereas, a high number of nursing
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admitted into Nursing
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(around
245000
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. The least
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students
were enrolled
in computer science in both years.

Subjects like law
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(around
90000), design
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(around
70000), and computer science
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(around
55000) in 2007 had a linear increment in the following
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2014 compared to exponential growth for nursing ranging from
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around
58000 (during 2007) to
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around
245000 (during 2014).

Psychology admission count had no increment nor decrement and remained stable during both the years at
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around
80000 admits.
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medicine's initial figure was
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70000 (in 2007) and had a slighter
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surge to
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around
80000 (in 2014).
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IELTS academic The charts below show the most popular courses by admissions at UK universities in 2007 and 2014.

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