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The pie charts compare the proportion of the trend in using water in six areas all over the world in term of three different categories

The pie charts compare the proportion of the trend in using water in six areas all over the world in term of three different categories 56kEm
As we can see, it is clear that more than 70% water usage in Central Asia, Africa, South East Asia and South America related to agricultural and highest distribution in this purpose is 88% in Central Asia. In same field less usage is 39% in North America and 32% in Europe.
As we can
see
, it is
clear
that more than 70% water usage in Central Asia, Africa, South East Asia and South America related to agricultural and highest distribution in this purpose is 88% in Central Asia. In same field less usage is 39% in North America and 32% in Europe.
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IELTS academic The pie charts compare the proportion of the trend in using water in six areas all over the world in term of three different categories

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