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The table illustrates average distance covered in miles per person in year 1985 and 2000 by different type of transportation medium.This data have been taken from England only.

The table illustrates average distance covered in miles per person in year 1985 and 2000 by different type of transportation medium. This data have been taken from England only. XDK5P
The table illustrates average distance covered in miles per person in year 1985 and 2000 by different type of transportation medium. This data have been taken from England only. Overall, in the year 1985 car was one of the most used transport medium by people while, taxi found the least famous mode of travel. On the other hand, after fifteen years in 2015 car got the same position and taxi has been replaced by bicycle got the least choice of people in England. It is quite clear from the table, in the year 1985 most of the people used car to cover maximum average distance by 3, 199 miles followed by other mode, local bus, train and walking by 450, 429, 289 and 255 miles respectively. However, bicycle and taxi were the least used model by 51 and 13 miles only. Besides that, in the year 2015 distance travelled by car by 4806 miles which was better than the previous years followed by other vehicles, train, local bus and walking by 585, 366 and 237 miles respectively. Whereas, bicycle and taxi were the least used model by 42 and 41 miles only.
The table illustrates average distance covered in miles per person in
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1985 most of the
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199 miles
followed by other mode, local bus, train and walking by 450, 429, 289 and
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255 miles
respectively
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, bicycle and
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13 miles
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4806 miles
which was better than the previous years followed by other vehicles, train, local bus and walking by 585, 366 and
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237 miles
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IELTS academic The table illustrates average distance covered in miles per person in year 1985 and 2000 by different type of transportation medium. This data have been taken from England only.

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