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The chart illustrates how clothing is recycled from plastic bottles.

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The chart illustrates how clothing is recycled from plastic bottles. Overall, the process consists of twelve stages, beginning with collecting used bottles making out of plastic, and ending with sewing clothes from this materials. At the initial stage of the process, plastic bottles are gathered before being delivered to factories by truck where takes place various steps to complete products. In the next stage, the bottles are classifying by workers to be ready for cutting into tiny pieces. The process continues with washing to eliminate all of the dirt and unnecessary materials. After that, they are completely sun-dried before being melted plastic down at high temperatures. In the next stage, liquid plastic is strained and yarned into small fibers. In the penultimate stage, single fibers are weaved by the machine into desire pieces of cloth as a preparation for making clothes in the following stages. The process ends when these fabrics are rolled into units and eventually being manufactured into clothes.
The chart illustrates how clothing
is recycled
from
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plastic
bottles.

Overall
, the
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process
consists of twelve
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stages
, beginning with collecting
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used
bottles making out of
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plastic
, and ending with sewing
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clothes
from
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this
materials.

At the initial
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stage
of the
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process
,
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plastic
bottles
are gathered
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before
being delivered
to factories by truck where takes place various steps to complete products. In the
next
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stage
, the bottles are classifying by workers to be ready for cutting into tiny pieces. The
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process
continues with washing to eliminate
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all of the
dirt and unnecessary materials. After that, they are completely sun-dried
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before
being melted
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plastic
down at high temperatures. In the
next
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stage
, liquid
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plastic
is strained
and
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yarned
into
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small
fibers. In the penultimate
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stage
, single fibers are
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weaved
by the machine into desire pieces of
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cloth
as a preparation for making
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clothes
in the following
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stages
. The
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process
ends when these fabrics
are rolled
into units and
eventually
being manufactured
into
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clothes
.
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IELTS academic The chart illustrates how clothing is recycled from plastic bottles.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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