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a wind turbines structure

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The diagrams illustrate the structure of a wind turbine and its function and analyze optimum location in order to install turbines respectively from left to right. overall, a wind turbine is utilized so as to generate electrical power by renewable wind energy. Additionally, the height, size, and installation location of the turbine are impressive aspects of the output's amount. according to the left diagram, a wind turbine is formed from three blades which are made of fiberglass or wood, and a tall tower formed from steel that is linked to a generator whose output is 1. 5 megawatts. Additionally, there is a sensor by which speed and direction of the wind can be measured which is installed at the top of the generator. Furthermore, a computer is located in the control center nearby the tower in order to receive the sensor's information and adjust the turbine. Two different places can be taken into consideration for wind turbine installation. To begin with, it can be placed on the top of the mountain where the wind blows with maximum strength. Moreover, the turbine can be located near the coast where the wind blows weaker and output will maximum. Finally, there is a location on the hill where 100 kilowatts can be generated by the domestic turbines.
The diagrams illustrate the structure of a
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wind
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turbine
and its function and analyze optimum location in order to install
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turbines
respectively
from
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left
to right.

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overall
, a
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wind
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turbine
is utilized
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so as to
generate electrical power by renewable
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wind
energy.
Additionally
, the height, size, and installation location of the
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turbine
are impressive aspects of the output's amount.

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according
to the
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left
diagram, a
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wind
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turbine
is formed
from three blades which
are made
of fiberglass or wood, and a tall tower formed from steel that
is linked
to a generator whose output is 1. 5 megawatts.
Additionally
, there is a sensor by which speed and direction of the
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wind
can
be measured
which
is installed
at the top of the generator.
Furthermore
, a computer
is located
in the control center nearby the tower in order to receive the sensor's information and adjust the turbine.

Two
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different
places can
be taken
into consideration for
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wind
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turbine
installation. To
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begin
with, it can
be placed
on the top of the mountain where the
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wind
blows with maximum strength.
Moreover
, the
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turbine
can
be located
near the coast where the
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wind
blows weaker and output will maximum.
Finally
, there is a location on the hill where 100 kilowatts can
be generated
by the domestic
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turbines
.
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IELTS academic a wind turbines structure

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
214 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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