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The bar graph above illustrates the number of people living in urban areas from different parts of the globe. It illustrates how different is the numbers percentage wise from the year 1950 to 2050. Overall at the beginning of the period, Africa and Asia seem to be equal. There is a slight difference in the numbers. It is seen that in the year 1950 Africa has 15% of the population and Asia has 17%. This is the least amongst all. Whereas, For Asia in the year 2007 and 2050 there is a slight increase in the population as compared to Africa. According to the diagram, in the year 1950 Europe has seen to have an increasing trend. Also, the same goes for the rest of the cities as well. The percentage has increased, but at the end of the period there is seen a decline in the number of population. Moving ahead, in the years 2007 and 2050, from the city Europe to Oceania, there is seen a upward trend throughout the years. But however at the end of the period again there is seen a decline in the population for urban areas.

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