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The table illustrate the plenty of travelers who went to Ashdown Museum in the year before and after it was renovated. The two charts present the result of surveys of tourists satisfaction, during the exact times.

The table illustrate the plenty of travelers who went to Ashdown Museum in the year before and after it was renovated. The two charts present the result of surveys of tourists satisfaction, during the exact times. YwJ2K
The table illustrate the plenty of travelers who went to Ashdown Museum in the year before and after it was renovated. The two charts present the result of surveys of tourists satisfaction, during the exact times. Generally speaking, the year after restored of Ashdown Museum had more popular than the year before restored. Moreover, the result of tourists how satisfied in the year later refurbishment had very impressed and a few disappointed, while the surveys of the year before renovated had disappointed and a few very satisfied. Looking first at the highest popularity in the table in the year after restored, it can be seen that, the number of tourists had increased significantly. To be more exact, the previously had only 74, 000 persons, while the latter had grown up to 92, 000 persons. Further, the surveys in the year after renovation had risen the same. More precisely, the tourists had very impressed 35 percentage. On the other hand, tourists had very impressed in the year before renovated just 15 percentage. Last, the result of the year before renovated showed that the travelers had dramatically disappointed in the rate of 40, while tourists disappointed in the year after renovated in a few of 15 percentage.
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and after it was
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renovated
. The two charts present the result of surveys of
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tourists
satisfaction, during the exact times.

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speaking, the
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year
after restored of
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Ashdown
Museum had more popular than the
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year
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before
restored.
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, the result of
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tourists
how satisfied in the
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year
later refurbishment had
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very
impressed and a few disappointed, while the surveys of the
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year
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before
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renovated
had disappointed and a few
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very
satisfied.

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first
at the highest popularity in the table in the
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year
after restored, it can be
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seen
that, the number of
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tourists
had increased
significantly
. To be more exact, the previously had
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only
74, 000 persons, while the latter had grown up to 92, 000 persons.

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, the surveys in the
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year
after renovation had risen the same. More
precisely
, the
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tourists
had
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very
impressed 35 percentage.
On the other hand
,
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tourists
had
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very
impressed in the
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year
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before
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renovated
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just
15 percentage. Last, the result of the
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year
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before
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renovated
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showed
that the travelers had
dramatically
disappointed in the rate of 40, while
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disappointed in the
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year
after
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renovated
in a few of 15 percentage.

IELTS academic The table illustrate the plenty of travelers who went to Ashdown Museum in the year before and after it was renovated. The two charts present the result of surveys of tourists satisfaction, during the exact times.

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