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Based on the following supportive evidence, write a standard comparison/contrast essay.

Based on the following supportive evidence, write a standard comparison/contrast essay. YwJmd

Both Linda’s Rest and José’s Rest are restaurants, and yet they offer vastly different experiences to their customers. Comparing and contrasting the two restaurants based on their prices, their services, and their facilities show how different and similar the two are. Linda’s Rest and José’s Rest have three similarities. Linda’s Rest opens from 7 a. m. just as José’s Rest does. Linda’s Rest provides drive-in service, José’s Rest does also. Finally, both of them have clean bathrooms and parking spaces. Despite their similarities, they still have major differences. First, Linda’s Rest and José’s Rest sell the same dishes, but they bear no resemblances in prices. Linda’s Rest’s dishes are not as expensive as José’s Rest dishes: sandwiches at Linda’s Rest cost $4. 00 while José’s cost $4. 50. Another difference is their services. Linda’s Rest closes at 9 p. m. while José’s closes at 7 p. m. Moreover, Linda’s has home delivery services, three cashiers in rush hours yet José’s do not have home delivery services and there are two cashiers in rush hours. Furthermore, they have lots of dissimilarities in facilities. Linda’s has 12 tables / 48 chairs, 20 parking spaces, playground for kids and air conditioner. Unlike Linda’s Rest restaurant, José’s has 8 tables/32 chairs, 10 parking spaces, there are no playground for kids, and only ceiling fans.

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 and similar the two are.

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 and José’s You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvacation
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. Finally
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Rest
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 they bear no resemblances in prices. Linda’s You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvacation
Rest’s
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Rest
 cost $4. 00 while José’s cost $4. 50. Another difference is their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
services
. Linda’s You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvacation
Rest
 closes at 9 p. m. while José’s closes at 7 p. m. Moreover
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, three cashiers in rush hours yet
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 and there are two cashiers in rush hours. Furthermore
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Rest
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 for kids, and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 ceiling fans. 

IELTS academic Based on the following supportive evidence, write a standard comparison/contrast essay.

Academic

American English

3 paragraphs

220 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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