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The table highlights data about on the number of travellers using three major British airports between 1998 and 2003

The table highlights data about on the number of travellers using three major British airports between 1998 and 2003 akM9
The table illustrates data about the number of travellers used three major British airports, over a six-year period between 1998 and 2003. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that there were slight upward trends in Heathrow, Gatwick and Stansted in using of travellers. Another remarkable feature is that corresponding figures were seen in Stansted over the period shown. The number of travellers rose significantly to 36. 4 million in 1999 in Heathrow, and after that there was a rapid increased to 48. 2 million in 2000. Following this, the figure fell marginally to 37. 1 million in 2001, after which, the number of visitors grew sharply to 45. 6 million in 2003. The number of travellers rose slightly to 41. 9 million in Gatwick in 1999. Next, the number of visitors rocketing to 69. 3 million in 2003. At this point, the number of travellers increased rapidly to 39. 9 million in Stansted in 2000. Subsequently, the number of visitors recovered to 43. 3 million in 2001 and this numbers stayed the same from 2001 to 2003.
The table illustrates data about the
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three major British airports, over a six-year period between 1998 and 2003.
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Stansted
in using of
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travellers
. Another remarkable feature is that corresponding figures were
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seen
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Stansted
over the period shown. The
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travellers
rose
significantly
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million
in 1999 in Heathrow, and after that there was a rapid increased to 48. 2
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in 2000. Following this, the figure fell
marginally
to 37. 1
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in 2001, after which, the
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of visitors grew
sharply
to 45. 6
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in 2003. The
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travellers
rose
slightly
to 41. 9
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million
in Gatwick in 1999.
Next
, the
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of visitors rocketing to 69. 3
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million
in 2003. At this point, the
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travellers
increased
rapidly
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Stansted
in 2000.
Subsequently
, the
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of visitors recovered to 43. 3
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in 2001 and this
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stayed the same from 2001 to 2003.
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IELTS academic The table highlights data about on the number of travellers using three major British airports between 1998 and 2003

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