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Percentage of men and women worked on different fields

Percentage of men and women worked on different fields RO9V

Given are two pie charts comparing proportion of males and females employed in 6 various categories divided into manual and non-manual. The data is provided in percent measurements for the year 1992 in Great Britain. In general, it is evident that for both genders managerial and professional positions were well-prefered sectors. However, the most percentage of women worked in non-manual positions while an opposing indication was seen for men. In detail, less than a third of females employed in clerical or related spheres while for men the index was noticeably low in this sector. Reversely, 24 % men showed a big preference for crafts whereas only 3 percent women had interest in this job in Britain. Another big discrepancy was seen in clerical position. The percentage of men in this sector was 6 times as low as the date in females. . With regard to some similar data between two sexes in job patterns, both genders occupied in nearly the same percentages in other manual and non manual jobs representing 26 and 27 % in accordance.

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