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The charts below show agricultural production in two different regions of the country Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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A glance at 2 pie charts reveals the farming commodities in two different sectors of the country. While the percentage of vegetables and dairy products in the East is quite different from that of the Western sector, meat products take up the highest rate in both areas. An overwhelming majority of agricutural products from the East belongs to meat with 35%, closely followed by dairy goods with 30%. Meanwhile, the ratio of grain yields in this area is only half compared to that of dairy. Contrary to the percentage of it in Eastern region, grain approximately makes up half of all products from farming with 45%. On the other hand, vegetables and dairy goods only account for one - fifth of the western agricultural products whereas they half the total rate in the other area. Meat, however, occupies the exact same rate in both region - 35% of all products.
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sectors of the country. While the percentage of vegetables and dairy
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in the East is quite
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from that of the Western sector, meat
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take up the highest rate in both areas.

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from the East belongs to meat with 35%,
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with 30%. Meanwhile, the ratio of grain yields in this area is
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half compared to that of dairy.

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from farming with 45%.
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fifth of the western agricultural
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whereas they half the total rate in the other area. Meat,
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IELTS academic The charts below show agricultural production in two different regions of the country

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