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The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. pqjw

The chart represents the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016, moreover, the table displays the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Firstly, in 2015, Petroleum products exports earning was more than 60$ billions and engineered goods earning was more than 55$ billions but less than 60$ billions. Gems and jewellery earning was 43-45 $ billions and agricultural products export earning was 33$ billions, moreover, Textiles export earning was 33$ billions. Secondly, in 2016, there was 3% increment in export of petroleum products and 8. 5% increment in engineered goods while 5. 18% decrement in Gems and jewellery, moreover, there was increment of 0. 81% in Agricultural products and 15. 24% in Textiles. To conclude, in 2015, export earning of Gems and jewellery was higher than in 2016, however, earning from petroleum products, engineered goods, Agricultural products and Textiles were higher in 2016 as compare to 2015.

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 in each category of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshipdumpsmuggletransport
exports
 in 2016 compared with 2015.

Firstly
, in 2015, Petroleum You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
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exports
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earning
 was more than The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$60".$60
60$
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billions
 and engineered This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
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earning
 was more than The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$55".$55
55$
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billions
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but
 less than The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$60".$60
60$
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billions
. Gems and Possible spelling mistake. 'jewellery' is British English.jewelry
jewellery
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earning
 was 43-The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$45".$45
45 $
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billions
 and agricultural You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
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export
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earning
 was The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$33".$33
33$
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billions
, moreover
, Textiles You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshipdumpsmuggletransport
export
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earning
 was The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$33".$33
33$
 billions.

Secondly
, in 2016, there was 3% increment in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshipdumpsmuggletransport
export
 of petroleum You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
 and 8. 5% increment in engineered This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 while 5. 18% decrement in Gems and Possible spelling mistake. 'jewellery' is British English.jewelry
jewellery
, moreover
, there was increment of 0. 81% in Agricultural You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
 and 15. 24% in Textiles.

To conclude
, in 2015, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshipdumpsmuggletransport
export
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbring indrawderivesecuregetreceive
earning
 of Gems and Possible spelling mistake. 'jewellery' is British English.jewelry
jewellery
 was higher than in 2016, however
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbring indrawderivesecuregetreceive
earning
 from petroleum You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
, engineered This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
, Agricultural You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
 and Textiles were higher in 2016 as compare to 2015. 