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The table gives information about the quantity of children ever born to Australian women aged from 40 to 44 years in 4 different years 1981, 1986, 1996 and 2006.

The table gives information about the quantity of children ever born to Australian women aged from 40 to 44 years in 4 different years 1981, 1986, 1996 and 2006. BMom6
The table gives information about the quantity of children ever born to Australian women aged from 40 to 44 years in 4 different years 1981, 1986, 1996 and 2006. It is noticeable that fewer and fewer children were given birth by middle-aged women and the number of women who had two children was highest in the shown years. It can be seen that nearly 3 out of 10 women in 40-44 years age group had two children in 1981, which was slightly lower than in 1986 (at over a third). The percentages of women who had either one child or none motsly clustered from 7. 6% to 9. 7% over a 5-year period from 1981 to 1986 while those of women had three and more child were much higher (approximately 28%) except the figure for women had four and more child in 1986, at 18. 9%. The period between 1996 and 2006 recorded a slight increase in the number of childless woman and woman with one child, and reached to 15. 9% and 13. 2% in 2006, respectively. However, the figures for woman had three and more child saw the opposite trend and decreased by 5% over a decade, while the percentage of women with two children had a very little change, at about 38%.
The table gives information about the quantity of
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ever born to Australian
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aged from 40 to 44 years in 4
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years 1981, 1986, 1996 and 2006.

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were
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birth by middle-aged
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and the number of
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who had two
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children
was highest in the shown years.

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3 out of 10
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in 40-44 years age group had two
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in 1981, which was
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lower than in 1986 (at over a third). The percentages of
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who had either one
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or none
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clustered from 7. 6% to 9. 7% over a
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5-year
period from 1981 to 1986 while those of
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women
had three and more
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were much higher (approximately 28%) except the figure for
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had four and more
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in 1986, at 18. 9%.

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, and reached to 15. 9% and 13. 2% in 2006,
respectively
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child
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the opposite trend and decreased by 5% over a decade, while the percentage of
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, at about 38%.
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