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The table gives information about the percentage of USA households with selected appliances in certain years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given table compare data about the proportion of household in America with their appliances from 1980 to 2005. Overall, TV sets and landline telephones were the most popular electric appliances among Americans, whereas central air conditioning was the least used one In the first 10 years, fridges, landline telephones and TV sets were the most used appliances in the USA. Among the three devices, landline telephones witnessed a considerable increase, commencing with 76% in 1980 and then rose markedly to 87% in 1990, while TV sets and fridges grew slightly. Besides, computers, as well as central air conditioning, were less favored in this period and video recorders were used by just 5% of households. From 1995 to 2000, TV sets and landline telephones still keep their popularity, however, TV sets surpassed landline telephones to became the most favored electric devices with 98% of ownership in 2005. Contrary to the former, fridges and washing machines remained stable at 86% and increase insignificantly by 1% respectively. Although been introduced lately, there was a sharp and rapid increase from 5% to 94% in the ownership of mobiles telephones. Additionally, video recorders followed the same patterns, rose significantly from 15% to 90%
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table compare data about the proportion of household in America with their appliances from 1980 to 2005.

Overall
, TV sets and landline
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telephones
were the most popular electric appliances among Americans, whereas central air conditioning was the least
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used
one

In the
first
10 years, fridges, landline
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telephones
and TV sets were the most
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used
appliances in the USA. Among the three devices, landline
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telephones
witnessed a considerable increase, commencing with 76% in 1980 and then rose
markedly
to 87% in 1990, while TV sets and fridges grew
slightly
.
Besides
, computers,
as well
as central air conditioning, were less favored in this period and video recorders were
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used
by
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5% of households.

From 1995 to 2000, TV sets and landline
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telephones
still
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keep
their popularity,
however
, TV sets surpassed landline
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telephones
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the most favored electric devices with 98% of ownership in 2005. Contrary to the former, fridges and washing machines remained stable at 86% and increase
insignificantly
by 1%
respectively
. Although
been introduced
lately, there was a sharp and rapid increase from 5% to 94% in the ownership of mobiles
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telephones
.
Additionally
, video recorders followed the same patterns, rose
significantly
from 15% to 90%
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