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The chart provide information about the responses of a students towards different facilities in a University, in 2007

The chart provide information about the responses of a students towards different facilities in a University, in 2007 A35Ll
The Pie Charts show the opinion of undergraduate and postgraduate students on the different facilities at the UniversityOverall, satisfaction level was similar in both matters and different in others. It can be seen that the school facilities satisfied the majority of undergrads, University cafeteria was the favourite of post graduates. Both under grades and post-graduate had similar feeling about the school rooms at the university. About two-thirds of both were satisfied, a quarter were not satisfied and remaining 13 to 14% each were quite satisfied. There was a marked difference of opinion regarding University cafeteria. Approximately 3rd fourth of postgraduates were very satisfied but only about half of undergraduate were very satisfied. 16% and 11% of postgraduates were quite satisfied and not satisfied respectively whereas these figures were 22% and 26% respectively for the undergrads. The major discrepancy was regarding School facilities for which only e a small minority of Under grades was not satisfied but water of postgraduates were not satisfied. Avast majority of Under grades were very satisfied whereas less than half postgraduates were very satisfied. 14% under grades were quite satisfied but almost a double postgraduates were quite happy with the school facilities.
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students on the
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the majority of undergrads, University cafeteria was the
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of post graduates. Both under
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and
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had similar feeling about the
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rooms at the university. About two-thirds of both were
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, a quarter were not
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and remaining 13 to 14% each were
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. There was a marked difference of opinion regarding University cafeteria. Approximately 3rd fourth of
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