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the table gives information about the percentage of adults in one European country who read at least one book of each type of book: print book, ebook, and audiobook in 2016.

the table gives information about the percentage of adults in one European country who read at least one book of each type of book: print book, ebook, and audiobook in 2016. 7PPlA
The table provides data on the proportion of grow-up people who spend time read at least one of each type: print book, ebook, and audiobook in one European country in 2016. Overall, it is noticeable that the figure of print book readers was the highest among the research ages wheares the figure for those who prefer audiobook was the lowest at all ages. Additionally, the percentage of elderly people aged 65+ readers was almost lowest at all types of book. In 2016, the rate of women keen on printbook was the highest among all stood at 74 percentage. At the same time, the proportion for those reading ebook and audiobook was the second highest, at about 33% and 15% respectively. In contrast, there are only 64% of men read printbook - the lowest rate among the research ages reading printbook. Similarly, 23% of ebook readers was men and the figure for those enjoyed audiobook accounted for 14% of the total male residents who were adults - The second lowest in terms of each kind of book. The young generation made up 73% of the reader prefer printbook, compared to the figure for those of elderly aged 65+ stood at about 66%. Adults at middle ages were made up the highest proportion in audiobook readers while the rate of people aged 30 - 49 and aged 50 - 64 read at least one audiobook all at 16% of those ages readers in 2016.
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