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The diagram illustrates information about how a solar panel powered water pump is used to provide water to the countryside with plenty of equipment. It is clear to see that this technology has been created by three types of components such as solar panel photovoltaic cells, an underground borehole as well as a water containing tank. In addition, each part of this has a different process to complete the way to deliver the water to the village. First of all, the solar panel was an essential part to operate because it used sunlight and converted it into electricity. Then, the DC power current is sent to the underground bore. According to the process, the bore simply had the function of pushing the water up but also the impactful equipment due to the absence of this a water tank could not receive water. Finally, tank water supplied these fresh water to the whole village.
The diagram illustrates information about how a solar panel powered
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pump is
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to provide
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to the countryside with
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plenty
of equipment.

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to
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that this technology has
been created
by three types of components such as solar panel photovoltaic cells, an underground borehole
as well
as a
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containing tank.
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, each part of this has a
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different
process to complete the way to deliver the
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water
to the village.

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, the solar panel was an essential part to operate
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because
it
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used
sunlight and converted it into electricity. Then, the DC power
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current
is
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sent
to the underground bore.

According to the process, the bore
simply
had the function of pushing the
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water
up
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but
also
the impactful equipment due to the absence of this a
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water
tank could not receive
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water
.
Finally
, tank
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water
supplied these fresh
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water
to the whole village.
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