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The table below gives information about the restaurants ale in three different branches in 2016.summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant .

The table below gives information about the restaurants ale in three different branches in 2016. 300Vl
The given tabular provides information about the restaurants performance at three different branches in Vancouver for the year 2016. As shown in the table, the best seller branch is Vancouver Georgia Street with the average of 854 which is 104 more than the dunsmuir street. While Drake Street is the lowest among all three with the transaction of 390. In the transaction value again the Georgia street wins again by dollar 10. 69 but at this time Drake street came ahead of Dunsumir with the transaction of dollar 9. 02 which is dolar 3. 14 extra by Dunsumir street. In number of eat-in transaction Georgia street took the crown by doing 405 transaction which was just 47 more than the Dunsmuir street and the Drake street did just 200 transactions. Take away transactions were mostly at the Georgia which were 449, the Dunsmuir street did 392 and lastly Drake street did 190 t transaction. The most liked dishes at Georgia Street was chicken burger, at Dunsmuir street the most favoured was chicken wings and the last branch Drake street most lived item was chicken pasta. Overall, it is clear that the Georgia street's branch is the most profitable among all the three branches.
The
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tabular provides information about the
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restaurants
performance at three
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different
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branches
in Vancouver for the year 2016.

As shown in the table, the
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best seller
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branch
is Vancouver Georgia
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Street
with the average of 854 which is 104 more than the
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dunsmuir
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street
.
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While
Drake
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Street
is the lowest among all three with the
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transaction
of 390. In the
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transaction
value again the Georgia
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street
wins again by dollar 10. 69
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but
at this time Drake
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street
came ahead of
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Dunsumir
with the
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transaction
of dollar 9. 02 which is
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dolar
3. 14 extra by
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Dunsumir
street.

In number of eat-in
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transaction
Georgia
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street
took the crown by doing 405
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transaction
which was
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just
47 more than the
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Dunsmuir
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street
and the Drake
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street
did
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200
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transactions
. Take away
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transactions
were
mostly
at the Georgia which were 449, the
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Dunsmuir
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street
did 392 and
lastly
Drake
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street
did 190 t
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transaction
. The most liked dishes at Georgia
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Street
was chicken burger, at
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Dunsmuir
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street
the most
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favoured
was chicken wings and the last
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branch
Drake
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street
most
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lived
item was chicken pasta.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that the Georgia street's
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branch
is the most profitable among all the three
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IELTS academic The table below gives information about the restaurants ale in three different branches in 2016.

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4 paragraphs
203 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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