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THE GRAPH SHOWS THE NUMBER OF BOOK READS BY MEN AND WOMEN AT BURNABY PUBLIC LIBRARY FROM 2011 TO 2014.

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THE LINE GRAPH ILLUSTRATES THE INFORMATION ABOUT HOW MUCH PERCENTAGE OF MEN AND WOMEN READ THE BOOKS AT BURNABY PUBLIC LIBRARY OVER A PERIOD OF 4 YEARS. OVERALL, IT IS MANIFEST FROM THE LINE GRAPH THAT THE RATIO OF MEN WAS THE HIGHEST, WHEREAS THE RATIO OF WOMEN WAS THE LOWEST THROUGHOUT THE GIVEN PERIOD. INITIATING AT 5000 IN 2011 AND GROW TO 8000 IN 2012, THE AVERAGE OF WOMEN READ THE BOOKS AT BURNABY PUBLIC LIBRARY IMMENSELY RISE BY 10000 IN 2013. ALTHOUGH ONLY 3000 IN 2011 AND SLIGHTLY ELEVATION TO 4000 IN 2012, THE QUANTITY OF MEN READ THE BOOKS AT BURNABY PUBLIC LIBRARY EXTREMELY SOARING BY 10000 IN 2013. LAST YEAR IN 2014, THE NUMERAL OF WOMEN READ THE BOOKS AT BURNABY PUBLIC LIBRARY DECLINE TO 8000 OUT OF 16000. WHILE THE PROPORTION OF MEN READ THE BOOKS AT BURNABY PUBLIC LIBRARY COMPARBLY EXTENSION BY 14000 OUT OF 16000.
THE LINE GRAPH ILLUSTRATES THE INFORMATION ABOUT HOW MUCH PERCENTAGE OF
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