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The table gives a comparison of the number of tourist arrivals in 8 countries in 2009 and 2010

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The table provides information about how many foreign visitors in eight countries in 2009 and 2010. Overall, in two years, US, Spain, UK, Italy saw a marginal increase in the number of visitors, while a significant rise happened in China, Turkey, and Germany. France, which had the highest number of international tourists, witnessed its figure remaining unchanged, whereas there is a decline in Hong Kong, which had the least number of foreign visitors. The amount of France’s international tourists stabilized at 76 million; meanwhile, US, UK and Italy recorded a slight growth of 1 million visitors, which is equal to 1, 5%, 1, 8% and 2, 3%, to 67, 56 and 45 million respectively over the period. In comparison, there was a small rise in Spain’s figure of 3, 6% to 57 million in 2010. The one-year period observed a leap of 33% equivalent to more than 10 million visitors in Turkey; China followed the same trend with a 55% surge from 22 to 34 million, along with Germany’s figure experiencing a two-fold jump in visitors’ number. In contrast, Hong Kong, with its figure falling (11%) from 10 million to 9 million is the only country that saw a decline in the number of foreign tourists.
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in eight countries in 2009 and 2010.

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, in two years, US, Spain, UK, Italy
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a marginal increase in the
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of
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, while a significant rise happened in China, Turkey, and Germany. France, which had the highest
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of international tourists, witnessed its
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remaining unchanged, whereas there is a decline in Hong Kong, which had the least
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of foreign visitors.

The amount of France’s international tourists stabilized at 76
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; meanwhile, US, UK and Italy recorded a slight growth of 1
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, which is equal to 1, 5%, 1, 8% and 2, 3%, to 67, 56 and 45
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respectively
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, there was a
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rise in Spain’s
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of 3, 6% to 57
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in 2010.

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in Turkey; China followed the same trend with a 55% surge from 22 to 34
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, along with Germany’s
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experiencing a two-fold jump in
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.
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, Hong Kong, with its
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falling (11%) from 10
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to 9
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