Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The charts below show information about environmentally friendly practices followed by three different cruise ship companies in two different years.

The charts below show information about environmentally friendly practices followed by three different cruise ship companies in two different years. 1kEAW
As can be seen in the chart, it is shown about environmentally friendly execution in three various boat trips corporations rightly. However, as the diagram suggest it is represented that it happen in 2000 and 2010. Overall, turning the details, it could be noticed that in 2000 in sea cruises have not a system to reduce air pollution correctly and avoid destinations with delicate underwater ecosystems properly, but also in 2010 it could be remarked that it is changed plainly.
As can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
in the chart, it
is shown
about
environmentally
friendly execution in three various boat trips corporations
rightly
.
However
, as the diagram suggest it
is represented
that it happen in 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, turning the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
, it could
be noticed
that in 2000 in sea cruises have not a system to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
air pollution
correctly
and avoid destinations with delicate underwater ecosystems
properly
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
in 2010 it could
be remarked
that it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
plainly
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The charts below show information about environmentally friendly practices followed by three different cruise ship companies in two different years.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
80 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 6.5band
    the table gives information thw numbers of tecnolgy used by people in five years
    The table demonstrates the number of technology research workers per million people in five different countries, during the period from 2003 to 2007. The most noticeable trends are steady increase and decrease in numbers of researchers in Turkey and Poland. In 4 years shown, the number of Turkey’s ...
  • 6band
    Diagram of Skeletal System
    The diagram shows a comparison of the two skeletal systems of the modern human being. One is named as Australopithecus afrarensis, the walker and tree climber and the other is Homo erectus, the walker and endurance runner. A major difference between the two is their width of the body with the tree ...
  • 6band
    The par chart compares the normal electrical consumption
    The par chart compares the normal electrical consumption for five different home activities in America. The results are measured by watts and calssified by day hours. Not surprisingly, Power usage is at it's least after mednight, increases gradually and fluctuate after early morning and reach its p...
  • 5band
    Diagram representing the carbon cycle in nature
    The diagram gives us a gist of how a carbon cycle occurs in our nature. First, the energy from the sun is used by plants for performing a process called photosynthesis which produces organic carbon. This organic carbon goes through the underground where there are dead and decayed organisms or waste ...
  • 6band
    the diagram below shows production of red wine.
    The given process chart illustrares the information regarding that how red wine is produced with the help of grapes. In general, ten steps has been involved in the production of red wine, beginning with the selection of fresh wave and culminating with bottling. In the initial step, selection of gr...
  • 6band
    The table below shows the information of money spent on four common items in UK in 1998
    The table industries and provide the information of the expenditure in a UK on a fourth common item in the 1998. It is clearly seen that women and adults and a maximum amount on food and least on the videos. looking at the detail it is prepared from the table that I'll spend maximum amount of their ...