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The bar chart gives information about the percentage of divorce people in two various nations of United Kingdom which are Finland and Sweden during the period 2011 and 2015. In Finland the rate of divorce in 2011 was about 35%, in 2012 it was around 32%, in 2013 it was near 40%, in 2014 it was about 41% and in 2015 it was the same as 2014. In Sweden the proportion of repudiation in 2011 was around 43%, in 2012 it was almost 50%, in 2013 was about 48%, in 2014 it was around 46% and in 2015 was about 38%. Overall, it can be clearly seen from the bar chart that Sweden had the highest number of divorce folks while Finland had the lowest number by the year 2012. mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
The bar chart gives information about the percentage of divorce
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in two various nations
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of United Kingdom
which are Finland and Sweden during the period 2011 and 2015.

In Finland the rate of divorce in 2011 was about 35%, in 2012 it was around 32%, in 2013 it was near 40%, in 2014 it was about 41% and in 2015 it was the same as 2014. In Sweden the proportion of repudiation in 2011 was around 43%, in 2012 it was almost 50%, in 2013 was about 48%, in 2014 it was around 46% and in 2015 was about 38%.

Overall
, it can be
clearly
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from the bar chart that Sweden had the highest number of divorce folks while Finland had the lowest number by the year 2012.
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