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The chart shows the sales of cars and sales by types from 2015 to 2019.

The chart shows the sales of cars and sales by types from 2015 to 2019. QlWRb
The line graph illustrates the sales of cars between five years from 2015 and 2019 whereas the pie chart depicts the demand of various types of cars. Overall, it can be clearly seen that though the sales of Xbrand car was less initially but it increased at the end. Interestingly, the sales of MPV cars was the highest from all the other types of cars. To begin with, the sales of Xbrand cars were 1 millions in 2015 where it continuously increased to 3 millions in 2019 respectively. While, the Ybrand cars showed declined in sales from 2015 to 2019. However, the sales of Zbrand cars were the highest 3 millions in 2015 but there was a drastic change at the end if a period as the sales stood up to only 2 millions. Furthermore, the demand for MPV cars were the highest amongst all the other cars at 35%. The sales of SUV and Hatchback City Car were almost similar which was 25% and 27% respectively. There was a difference of 7 % between Sportcar and Sedan as the sales were 3% and 10 % only
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