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The table given demonstrates the interest of different age brackets in a European country in different TV shows in 2012.

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The table given demonstrates the interest of different age brackets in a European country in different TV shows in 2012. It is clear from the chart that while the majority was displayed in feature films and sports, there was a big difference between news programs and cartoons. About 29% of the 11-15s viewers watched cartoons. The opposite number was seen in the people who watch the news, approximately 6%. In contrast, there were in the neighborhood of 4% of people in the age group 21-25 who saw cartoons compared to 23% of news viewer.
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age brackets in a European country in
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TV
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shows
in 2012.

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from the chart that while the majority
was displayed
in feature films and sports, there was a
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big
difference between news programs and cartoons.

About 29% of the 11-15s viewers
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watched
cartoons. The opposite number was
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seen
in the
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people
who
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watch
the news, approximately 6%.
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, there were in the neighborhood of 4% of
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people
in the age group 21-25 who
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saw
cartoons compared to 23% of news viewer.
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IELTS academic The table given demonstrates the interest of different age brackets in a European country in different TV shows in 2012.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
94 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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