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The line graph illustrates the percentage of 18-25 year olds enrolled in tertiary education programs in four countries from 1961 to 2011.

The line graph illustrates the percentage of 18-25 year olds enrolled in tertiary education programs in four countries from 1961 to 2011. kW20e

The line graph illustrates the percentage of 18-25 year olds enrolled in tertiary education programs in four countries from 1961 to 2011. Overall, it can be seen that Singapore had the highest proportion of 18-25 year olds studying at universities for majority of given time period. Also, there was an increase in proportion opting for higher education in all the countries. In 1961, the proportion of 18-25 year Thais enrolled in university was 25 and it was followed by Singapore at 15%. By contrast, the percentage studying at universities in Philippines and Malaysia was only 7% and 2% respectively. From 1961 to 1991, there was a slight decrease in proportion from Thailand studying at universities, while the proportion increases slightly to around 15% for both Malaysia and Philippines. In Singapore also, the proportion rose but with fluctuations and in 1991, about 35% of 18-25 year olds were enrolled in Universities. Over the last decades from 1991 to 2011, the proportion of Singaporean, Filopino and Thai 18-25 year olds went up, whereas the figure in Malaysia remained unchanged. In 2011, the percentages studying at universities stood at around 40% in Singapore and Thailand, while the figures for Philippines and Thailand was considerably lower at 15% and 10% respectively.

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