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The diagram shows the different stages in the process of converting an animal hide into leather goods

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The diagram explains the way in which leather commodities are made for the clothing industry. Overall, it is obvious that there are 11 stages in the whole leather producing process, commencing with the drying of animal skin and ending with the delivery of the leather goods to the customers. First of all, the animal skin used to make leather goods is transported by the truck to the factory for processing. On arrival, it is submerged in cup with water and lime, after that, it is transferred to another vat where it is soaked in lime, following this, it is sent to a large rolling machine for flatteing. In the subsequent stage, it is submerged in a liquid tallin where is a mixture of the water and vegetable. In the next stage, it is polished with the roller machine for to make surface straight. The leather is then packged by the truck to the factory. In the last stage, bags, shoes and sports equipment are produced in the factory for the buyers.

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 commodities are made
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 to the customers.

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leather
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goods
is transported
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stage
, bags, shoes and sports equipment are produced
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