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Do you agree that banning cars is an effective way to reduce air pollution?

Do you agree that banning cars is an effective way to reduce air pollution? jVAdp

Air pollution has been a matter of concern for many years. Since it is believed to be a consequence of cars releasing emissions, some people contend that forbidding cars will ease the problem effectively. From my perspective, I am not with that opinion because there are many other factors that contribute to air pollution. It is undeniable that there exist some countries that use motorbikes as a main vehicle such as Vietnam. Banning cars yet allowing this means of transport cannot help alleviate the situation while the emissions from motorbikes can be equal to or outweigh those from cars. Furthermore, the industrial factories still work and produce detrimental chemicals that make air polluted.

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